by museatology
This is a very good story with good plot and character development, paced just right. It would be nice to have a sequel where Evie tells her father she wants his baby.
What hes allowed to have other women, but he want allow her to have other men
TOTALLY FUCKED UP THE STORY WITH THE MASSAGE SLUTS THEN ISOBEL.
EVIE IS JUST ANOTHER WHORE LIKE HER MOTHER
Are you going to just stop?????? Man---I hate it when writers do this.
Just got interesting and left me wanting more to see what happens. Please submit a conclusion on this family.
I liked this story until other women started banging her daddy. So how come Evie gets no real fun with other men as well? Evie barely getting it in on with Marcia is not the same thing like how her daddy was having fun with Maria and Isabel. Evie, do better girl.
Seriously no follow up? I mean, we could all write a "version" of the story but the biggest draw is knowing where you take it...
Took me about ten seconds to realise who Emily was.... Oh... Yeah. F**k fest time!! Or maybe not as Emily would want him full time! Erm.. Next chapter please..
Like most 'sequels' to an original, this just went too far on the end & turned into a typical porn flick scene....
2 stars for the ending...