All Comments on 'Cum Slut for her Big Brother'

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PeterPeePeterPeeover 3 years ago
Nice start!

Hi Yin,

I like your style. I do have some suggestions that might help, which I will send in pm.

Go on!

Peter

Firmhands5Firmhands5over 3 years ago
Just keep cumin

Ah - what a BIG brother - great beginning for the first year!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
History disconnect?

It sure sounded like or seemed to imply to me that she was too easy, that they might have had some 'casual' sexual history before college.

CallmesiriCallmesiriabout 3 years ago

This was really hot, I'm looking forward to reading more

Helen1899Helen1899over 1 year ago

hot, very hot, i will read more, she's one hot girl

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