All Comments on 'Cumplete Comeuppance Pt. 01'

Counting the moments until the boilerplate “fag cuck shit” comment appears...

They should just make it part of the comment template.

100 pounds, smoking and a cunt equals a divorce. The ending puts this squarely in BDSM, fetish or non-con. Her actions put her in jail the minute he gets loose. She squashes her cunt into his face and he bites a piece of her off and she needs emergency surgery. This has no where to go, it was poorly written and totally uninteresting. Please stop posting. You can't write.

No stars as even giving this drivel one star would be an insult to the star.

Please, this is so bad and sick, that we have to beg you: "Make this your last attempt at a story"! Just an intro and had already make us get nauseous!

time to grow some balls and kick kate in the cunt and throw her and his stupid wife to the curb anything else would be unjust

of course we'll say

cuck shit

that's what this is. the author is silly enough to write a very niche fetish that the majority of humanity find stupid/repulsive. you think stories like this don't need a warning? well, how bout we find a rare fetish even you don't like and drop it on you....like snuff. killing another human being. it's a fetish. right up there with cuck shit.

Into neither humiliation nor masochism! Poor dears! I was confused for a time as to which of the two ladies was his wife and which her friend, though it became explicit by the end. And now, the subjection of him yet to come? His gradual awareness of perverse gratifications? Yum!

@VickieTern! If she likes to disrespect and degrade her husband (is she married?) she for sure doesn't live him. We have hete a trio of whores: @amyyum, @VickieTern and @annetebishop.

If you wont to write about your dreams of cock sucking and piss drinking then go to fetish or gay and dont pester normal people!!

What stupid pathetic nonsense wimp cuck tale!

This tale is crap at its finest!

Well at least this lame story is quite short and just made me waste three minutes of my time.

1* for this trash.

waste of time...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Wouldn't lump Amy in with Annette and Vickytern. Amy does some decent writing, the other two are utter losers.

In your case, it was tough. Vile characters and subject.

I guess you did a good job of portraying a mentally I'll wimp.

BTW, bi people don't need you using their own as the template for your screwball protag.

I do admire people who have a go at being a Literotica writer, however do we need more cock stories. This site is awash with cuck stories, so please, please lets have stories that are about true loving wifes.

You have the stories about LW it's in the Romance section you fucking retard,. For God sakes how fucking dumb are you????

Rubbish

And unfinished to boot! That doesn't surprise me since it's complete garbage. Unless the women plan on killing Hubby, they're going to jail for a long, long time. They've committed so many felonies against her husband that I just had to laugh. The only thought in his head will be whether he kills the women or just sends them to prison. I assume this was written to troll the readership. It failed. Just more drivel for the junk pile.

1 star

one star- nothing more needs to be said.

Please write more!

Cuck and whore garbage of the lowest kind.

Fantastic! Don't stop, I need more!