by IJS0904
Gary and Lisa, seemed to have hit the jackpot, first adding Rachel, and now could Tina be drawn in as well.
More, more, more. Lisa and Rachel should have handled the cleanup. And, Gary likely needs to further expand that shower into a playground. Speaking of his two "wives", what were they doing all this time? Why weren't they playing with them? Just both wanting him to have his own fantasy? Or were they so busy together that they couldn't help. You may need to do separate POV chapters soon.