All Comments on 'Curses Ch. 11'

You started to hit your stride about 3-4-5 chapters, back. The quality of the writing, the characters and thr humor are all syncing, well. For having constantly morphing characters, you've still managed to create some growth in them, and develop their depth as the chapters pass. This could make one hell of a high-end porno script.

As, 'The Auteurs' would say, "Zee haf fuund yeir vrittdint voiice."

GeoD