by Adanaliyik
You tell a story in such a boring matter. I had to force myself to finish the first page and was not happy to see it went on two more pages.
Even totally negative feedback is helpful, since it tells me which of my stories are better written, and where I need to step up my game.
and feel free to ignore the totally worthless hateful negs by folks who have never posted a word of their own to the site, and who somehow derive sick joy out of the prospect of hurting your feelings.