All Comments on 'Cyber-Animal café'

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hindsight2020hindsight2020about 1 month ago

Is this going somewhere?

Doesn't look like it.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Whilst I like the idea at base, there doesn't seem much of a 'transformation' in this write of the story. Just a sudden replacement of the previous protagonist with a new female Robot that could have been created just as well by turning the robot on without bothering to downloading a mind that then gets immediately discarded. Either more of the original person should have been retained in the robot-Bunnygirl, so that there was a point why they bothered using a person to make her in the first place, or else the whole transformation should have been far slower and over a far longer period, with the protagonist replaced part by part slowly in a Ship of Theseus scenario.

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