All Comments on 'Cynthia's Submission Ch. 26'

at first i thought, nooooooo.... this can't be the end theres so many other things she needs to experience, but then i read the authors note and am glad the continuation.

for a twist for sage and Cynthia story lines it would be interesting to see them in the reversal roles. Sage starting collage looking for another submissive but ending up being the submissive herself. and Cynthia being the master and having her own submissive.

but all in good time and i hope its sooner then later.

keep up the writing your more creative then i would ever be. :)

I totally understand about the ending and I agree. All great things come to an end and this was great. Thank you and I do hope you do continue writing, especially if you include Cynthia. Maybe between Cynthia and Addison, they can experience many new things. Whether it be that Addison becomes the dominant or both of them are controlled by Jerome. Or maybe a new student can step in and control them both.

However you decide to continue, please know, I am looking forward to reading all your stories.

Thank you for the great ride.

This whole thing was great, but for this last chapter, you should of had sage put her threw the hardest and most humiliating thing ever, like running threw a faculty picnic nude but she has a hood on to cover her identity, something big to remember their time together

This was my favorite story on this website. Sad to see it come to an end.

hii It is my one of the Best Story ever. so yes I was disappointed to see that you are ending it but there is one way to make things right, just let it end here and when ever you are ready, or you think its a time you can start to write it again with the LEAP in Story.

Like, after 5-6 years they meet each other "Accidentally" like Cynthia is leaving somewhere and Sage is her new Neighbour or they are working at same place or One of them is working there or you can use the same plot like Cynthia is teaching somewhere in Higher University and Sage join there for her further or specific course/education Both are surprised... Anything you feel suitable...

I mean I totally understand that you are the writer of this Beautiful and Amazing Story but I am sooooo much in love in this story that I just cant accept it end So please just think about my Ideas and reply.

To meerly say 'thank you' for all the...I don't know if 'joy' is the correct word... I guess 'pleasure' would be a better term...The pleasure you have given me over the past year or so since I discovered your work is remarable. Now to have to release you is just so hard! I feel as though I 'm losing a friend, albeit one I can return to frequently to read your other submissions. Fare theewell, Cynthia and Sage. Hopefully I will read more about you in the future via Mistress GettingItDone! Infinity stars! You are my favorite author, as of now!!!

YOMEYO

I definitely would like to read more like a different student becoming the mistress are master and both teachers under control and both being pushed a little more maybe a group of students take over more humiliation to them both more outside fun and class room fun !

I would love to read more how about that other teacher became the head sub the both serve the master but then she serves both also and still have many things done to her in school maybe even have a new mistress are master student !

Pls continue this story with new twist

I think "Sage" is correct, there's nowhere else to go with their relationship. Well done, my friend.

I have loved this story and i think it could go further maybe under a new mistress in her class are one of the teachers including her friend teacher taking over our a students older sister or brother or maybe a new stranger but would love more in school uses more humiliation in school are close calls like some of the earlier one's

It's good to realise when a story should end, and to be honest, this could have ended sooner. It started to really get repetitive, then the Addison part put a little new touch to the story - until she took over as a dominant and didn't do much different than Sage would have done.

And in my eyes Sage wasn't a very good Mistress. She certainly pushed a lot of the right buttons, but she didn't take the needed responsiblity. She put her Sub into very dangerous situations without watching over her.

Overall a good story which made fun to read, but it's hardly believable that they got together that fast, that they never got caught though the risk increased permanently, and that they never disagreed on anything. No hint of a fight throughout the story. No second thoughts. No doubts. That's not how humans work.

But I enjoyed it anyway. Thanks!

I see both Marvs and Zyrbls points. Yes it was a joyful blast, though bit too much on the happy slut go lucky side to continue in this style much longer. But with Sage being a student character without too many details it is also authentic. It is fair to issume she is more in for the erotic Ds thrill while it lasts than a rare marry-Your-highschool-sweethart kind of girl (in that later case, we would have learned more about why committing to an older sub slut is just her thing). Moreover, at that age forever after realistically translates into until school (or even just a term) ends.

But this 26 chapter story is fine as it is. Being more a great exercise of an entertainment fantasy kind than in epic realism. Consistently leaving more complex plot and character options out of this story line makes for a more fluent and fun reading experience. Thank You and please continue sharing Your work

write these type of Lesbian stories please. This one was so good.

continue this story with them as neighbor and Sage working as her assistant to . This one was so good.