by Antidarius
I just finished reading all your chapters so far. Thanks for a really enjoyable twist on the virtual reality genre. I can’t wait to see what you have planned for our protagonist.
I have no right to complain. You do this for free and, hopefully, for fun. But I am getting absolutely desperate to see where you take this great story next.
My 2 cents
A great story so far. I like the story line and the characters. I like the flow of the story and the space you have between the sex scenes. The story is interesting by itself. Thanks for your time and imagination.