All Comments on 'Dad Comes Home'

Good job on your story. I enjoyed it!

Keep writing! I would love to see more insight into the feelings and motives of the characters. How did it make her feel, and why did she respond the way she did? Why did those men both assume she could or should be taken advantage of/ or become intimate generally?

Check out any of my stories if you're interested, thumbs up!

well done.....but then I love my daddy to.