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Click hereI followed, shocked at the change in his tone. My light mood had vanished.
In what seemed a shorter time out than our journey into the woods, we were back at the fence. I saw the underwear we had left still tossed over the wire. Everything was the same except that it now seemed as though years had passed since we were last here.
"Here we are," he said. With another shift of his tone he became frivolous, "How was your most excellent adventure?" Dad often made joking references to the title of a movie that we had watched together years before.
Standing grinning in reply, I watched while he grabbed his boxers and bent over to step into them. I said, "Dad."
"Huh, what is it?" was his reply, as he stood upright to begin pulling on his shorts. He paused with his long, soft cock hanging over the waist band and looked at me expectantly for a few seconds. Unspoken words seemed to fill the moment. Then, with a shift of his hips and continuing to look at me, he slowly pulled his underwear all the way on.
Realizing that he had been waiting for me to say something, I found a verve previously unknown and nervously said aloud, "I love what you did with me back there Dad," while jerking up my own underwear.
Without warning he grabbed out and pulled me to him. As his arms encircled me I heard a mumbled reply when our lips met. My heart swelled while we stood with our bodies and mouths pressed together, our tongues brushing. His hand pressed against the back of my head as our lips ground together and our breathing mingled.
After a long moment, we separated and silently walked in the darkness the remainder of the way to the house.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoI LOVED THIS STORY. It opened up some old feelings I felt as a boy but sadly never fulfilled. But I'd want it to be beautiful like this if it ever were.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoBeautiful. I felt like I really wanted to be in the nature there, bathed by the moon.
Playful4Bearabout 4 years agoThis is BY FAR... A LOOOOONG FAR... the BEST story I have read here!
Your writing is impeccable, the descriptive narrative is beautifully done (I'm "hyperboling", I know)... the story is magical, seductive, soft, a fairy tale... where emotions of lust are discovered and intimacy gets a new meaning.
Kudos to you!
oldcocklover69over 5 years agoAbsolutely loved you story about an everyday dad helping his up tight son come out of a shell n learn how to begin to enjoy life at it's best
AydanFiorealmost 7 years agoI know this story was published some time ago, but I just want to say that this is one of the best examples of how to ratchet the sexual tension tighter than a snare drum before ending with a big bang! Really well done! This is one of the most descriptive father / son blowjob scenes I've read yet.
My very first Literotica submission, which isn't 100% finished atm, will be published very soon. The sex is pretty hot, but it will be SO much hotter when I find a way to lead up to it with a nice slow burn like you've done here. Awesome read!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoone of my long time fantasies when i was young was to get down on my knees and use my virgin mouth to suck off my dad until he ejaculates thick gobs of semen down my throat
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI totally love the story! Its so well written and developed I wish it had 100 chapters.
I love how the relationship is slowly progressing into more and more every chapter. pls update ! xoxo
NellaBarely2almost 7 years agoOK, I'm also watching as I read this exquisite entry into other worldly delights. While watching I can only imagine Mathew could easily be this father figure - independent and private 'enough' to have other personal interests and not care what others believe in. You have crafted several new twists on an old theme into a very believable story line ... presented with care and respect for any male bonding introduction. I'm proud to say I met such a gentleman who carried himself such that I wanted to be like him, to know the experiences he lived and to be a part of his world. I hope others have this wonderful opportunity in their lifetime. I was 65 before I even such was available ... to everyone with an open mind. Thanks for sharing with your readers.
Tony Clarke
Anonymousover 7 years agoLoved the story, it is so well written and developed ... made real hard from the beginning ... uuuuffff
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThis is probably the best fic I have read in a long time. I can'twait to read more of this story the rest of your works! As a boy you make me long for a dad like this, thank you.
