All Comments on 'Daddy and Babygirl'

Thanks for you first story. Your writing is solid. Personally, I find this kind of rough DD/lg a complete turn off. I wish you had dropped in a few words or sentences here and there to show care between them. All I can see is the harshness. Your end may have been an attempt at that, but it was too neutral and still felt cold. The more in our face you are with the rough stuff, the more direct you need to be that it isn't simply an abusive relationship.

Really liked the story idea of daughter giving her all to daddy.

Some redundant expressions of pain/pleasure could use more pain for punishments

I hope you continue to write more great content

Is there more to this story you wish to write? Fleshing out the characters would be good. To better understand the relationship. Caring or using?