All Comments on 'Daddy & Boy'

by Universal_Thirst

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bhart1bhart1over 5 years ago
Very enjoyable, if a bit short

I loved the romantic tone. More development of Daddy's mentoring hand would've made the ending a little more touching. And, I have the feeling all these characters would've been totally captivating had we been given the time to get to know them. Many of the details of their lives, personalities and physical traits that you alluded to, sometimes in single sentences, were all great fodder for riveting reading. But all in all you hit the one right note I require for staying with a story...hot sex rooted in love. Thanks for sharing with us and I look forward to more from you.

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