All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
very good

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
mmmmm

very enjoyable...respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great story

the only bad thing i have to say is that the story is too short but at least you release a chapter a day. Cant wait for the next one. the suspense and anticipation makes daddy's and little one's inevitable joining all the more sweeter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
It's getting better

Not much character development but you seem to be going through all the scenes people like :)

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