All Comments on 'Daddy Bruce's "Daughter"'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Slip up

In part one he says he hasn’t seen her since she was 14 and in this story she talks about teasing him at her high school graduation. Need to keep your story straight.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Agreewith age discrepancy. Also other bloopers. Editor recommended...

5 despite distractions.

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