by TalesFromTheScript
Ohhhh nice twist. It would be cool if it turned out that she actually did get pregnant, that her father had switched her birth control pills with fertility pills just to make sure.
Love the twist at the end. Usually I can see that kind of stuff coming but I was truly taken by surprise. Great writing!
Figured the beginning and end prior to reading the story. Still enjoyed. Daughter pregnant? PART 2 PLEASE. THANKS
Saw the twist cumming, didn't care. Got me so hard, a unique take on the classic.
I hated the story it was one of forced sex and in the end the two guys should've been shot in the car park by the father for forcing him to basically start raping his daughter. What a load of shit.
Would have given five star rating but the thought of how it was manipulated by the dad can’t be endorsed by me. Well written with no dull moments is worth 4 star rating foresure.
The story was alright. Untill I read the ending. Makes the Dad look like a right A-hole.