All Comments on 'Daddy, his girl, and her friend…'

Well, you get two scores:

5 stars from the jerky, jerky boyz, cuz you had what they’ll never have. A real live woman. They’ll be spurting for days.

2 stars from anyone with literary skills/tastes, etc. since you are incapable of telling a decent story with authentic characters.

Thanks a lot and I wish you a cum shower with all the spunk your jerky-jerky unlaid boyz can produce.

That's so Hot 🔥

Proof Reading Required.

Can't read through all the typos. And of course they're sluts. Nope.

Too short, continue the story

This story has great potential...looking forward to more but you definitely need someone to proof read before publishing