All Comments on 'Daddy in the Dark'

Great story.. would love for a second part about it :)

Such great story, ruined in the ending

Really enjoyed this, would love a second part where daddy makes it up to Fawn and fucks her again.....

And apologize to her. He came on to her. And it was his best.

Hope there is a part 2 and daddy realizes how horrible he acted, and actually fucks her again, when he realizes how lucky he is to have a willing fuck toy

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Hope Mom joins the party.

Thanks everyone for all of the kind comments. :)

@POVscribe: That was actually the original ending. Agreed, it would have been nice. I changed it to this one because, if I end up writing a sequel, I wanted the knowledge of what had happened to hang in the air the next morning when they see each other again.

Very captive writing, loved it. My mind painted a full on picture of what you depicted. It really needs a next chapter, the open ending offers you to take it in any direction. Please, go for it!!!!

the best daddy/daughter stories I've read, sad the way it ended

Loved your build up and style. The emotions and her thoughts felt so real and it left me hungry for a part 2!

Now we wait for Part II :)

No!!! This needs another chapter. Don't leave us hanging.

No!!! We want another round of them fucking each other brain out.

All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited sex.

Please?

I've wanted to shag my dad Rick for years just like this. Hot hot hot hot hot! I'm 29, dad's 49...I've teased him for years hoping he would give in to me. He's scared shitless off bitch mum. His Loss..hit me up dad or daughter... I'm at stacy18_bi at Hotmail...my poor panty sniffing daddy...

I actually read this thought it's writing style was similar to stuff I've read before then realised I recognised the author LOL.

Ummm... no, we need more of this. I hope you'll consider adding a second chapter.

I want more... more... MORE... I hope you give a great finish (pun intended) to this ;)

Please you need to add another chapter. I want her dad to fuck her again knowing that it's his daughter

Please give us a sequel to this soon

This was amazing! I need to know what happened! Part 1 please.

This story feels so different than the typical incest story! Please continue!

Well written, colourful description. With a believable ending. A shocked and, in the post-coital clearness, appalled father. A daughter still basking in the afterglow, hovering close to insanity.

You can't end a story with a father and daughter on the brink of a shattered relationship. The daughter's world is ending and the Dad seems like he might just throw her out of the house. There has to be something that will bring them back together, hopefully the Mom.

Had me held in suspense the whole time. Definitely needs to be aother chapter

Excellentsuper hot story definitely needs a part 2 please

I don't normally enjoy reading a story a second time, but this one I'm probably on my fifth read by now. I just needed to let you know. Lol I cum at least twice every time I read this story. The animalistic, primal, passionate, rough, and hardcore fucking are definitely keeping me coming back.

Half the authors on here give us twenty minutes of reading to build up to a 30 second fuck, or less. While that's got its place and building anticipation is great, I love that you give us a long and detailed accounting of the actual act, while still giving us a decent buildup for context.

This was soooooo hot I am speechless and wet. Extremely wet

Oh Yes! So very REAL!

I wish I had a daddy to fuck me into that bed and eat me out like I'm the best thing that happened.

I love how sexy you wrote Daddy to be. Not just an abstraction of a man for her to fuck, but someone who seemed physically very there and very hot. Great great story.

Wow! So very hot. I started reading this with other in the same room. It wasn't long before I had to find somewhere very private. I can barely clear my head to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Thank you for the orgasm. My friend.

After reading this story I am all wet, Hope Dad will come in my Room instantly and fuck me hard. All wet and NAKED and My fingers rubbing my CLIT.

Oh, my dream. I'm so wet.

One of the best. Especially liked the description of daddy's thick hairy chest and his big cock and his being referred to as a stallion. Look forward to part two. Hope he shoots many more loads of semen in her young pussy.

Very hot

Like a lot of women commenters, this story made me wet, soaking wet. It's the kind of story I sit down and read when I'm using the dildo my husband never sees because it's so much bigger than him, and probably not big enough to equal Daddy. This is a masterwork, one I have read over and over.