All Comments on 'Daddy Issues'

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elleayeareelleayeareabout 4 years ago
You write tension so so well

Would love to read this from James’ POV

decimusdecimusabout 4 years ago
Beautiful and Hot

...deadly combination

black_beautyblack_beautyabout 4 years ago
More please!

Great story! I hope you'd make this in to a series like your others!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I was hoping that it would have been a video or something that she heard... not him actually screwing someone else while into her....

atenaiatenaiabout 4 years ago
Damn that was hot!

Thank you. This is now my thing. I didn't know, but I sure do now!

SilverMuseSilverMuseabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks for all the nice comments! I don't have any immediate plans to return to Kori and James, but I do have another story coming out in a couple of days. Stay tuned for "All The Things You Are" this weekend. I always appreciate your reads and feedback~ xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
very well done...

good english as well...

OmazeratiOmazeratiabout 4 years ago

I ,for one, hope that you don't turn this wonderful short story into a serial. It's perfect as it is.

GirlinukGirlinukalmost 4 years ago
Perfect

Thankyou for this story I loved it.

ManAmorousManAmorousalmost 4 years ago

HOT! VERY Hot!! The perfect blend of BDSM for me. Loved the present tense (Pov). Short and completely satisfying. Contest winner. Definitely a 10 on a scale of 1 to 5. And now one of my favs.

Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Beautiful!

Such a delightful BDSM tale! Please, please, PLEASE come back to Kori and James! I so want to see how their relationship takes flight. Perhaps she comes home to home to him after a hard day in the courtroom, having to be dominant and in charge, and Daddy makes everything better. Or she snaps at him and he punishes her. Please don't shelve these characters forever

OnethirstyunicornOnethirstyunicornover 3 years ago
Beautiful!

This is like my favorite story ever!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My task

Per my Daddy I was to find a story that made me ache, and this one was it. I very much enjoyed the part where every one of her holes were filled and she was becoming physically overwhelmed then began experiencing the veins on his cock, and tasting his pre cum. I also appreciated that there was a softness to him and he wasn’t in it for just a couple fucks; there’s a future between the two. It was nicely written, and I’d be delighted to have that gentleman as my neighbor. Him and his fat cock.

L O ReinsL O Reinsabout 3 years ago

Ace! 5 ⭐️! Nicely imagined and written. And H O T T T

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 3 years ago
Perfect

Everything about this story is perfect!

LindsayMurrayLindsayMurrayabout 3 years ago

Suuuuper cute, very fun, very hot!

bamagal2bamagal2about 3 years ago
My pussy tingled through the entire story! Loved all the interaction!

This story was amazing! I was hooked from the moment she turned the stereo up and brought him to her door and then taunted him, calling him Daddy" and asked what he was going to do about it if she DID sass him again! Perfect! And he had exactly the right combination of discipline and petting. Just Wow!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 3 years ago

OK, I'm trying to not drool here. What a story! I'm glad I've read Lit today just for this story. It has made reading a good thing today. I'd love to see a "more" on this one or parts 2-5 or more. We need more background on both people and especially Daddy. We need to see them develop into a full relationship and real strong love.

TinypandachanTinypandachanabout 3 years ago

Ooo~ now this was super hot

AngstIgnoredAngstIgnoredalmost 3 years ago

That was surprisingly steamy, given that the participants aren't actually in a true taboo relationship, yet it feels somehow even more naughty as a result. Great premise, curious to see how it plays out.

prevackerprevackerover 2 years ago

A lot of good elements, and a few "non-sequiters"...

Editing and combining some of the elements in Nemarle's story

https://www.literotica.com/s/i-dont-tell-anyone-about-spanking

might make it even better? But good enough as it is, I'm just greedy?

Gym52Gym52over 2 years ago

EXCELLENT.

Hot and steamy without being in any way crude or course.

takenbytakenbyover 2 years ago

That was fantastic! Loved the combination of rough, strict, and tender. Very hot.

KumquatqueenKumquatqueenabout 2 years ago

Outstanding! A rare (for this site) plausible story with nice caring BDSM.

StrixalucoStrixalucoalmost 2 years ago

Agreeing with the previous few commenters!

GrneyedDreamerGrneyedDreamer11 months ago

Sooooooo hot! Well done.

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