by SilverMuse
Great story! I hope you'd make this in to a series like your others!!
I was hoping that it would have been a video or something that she heard... not him actually screwing someone else while into her....
Thank you. This is now my thing. I didn't know, but I sure do now!
Thanks for all the nice comments! I don't have any immediate plans to return to Kori and James, but I do have another story coming out in a couple of days. Stay tuned for "All The Things You Are" this weekend. I always appreciate your reads and feedback~ xoxo
I ,for one, hope that you don't turn this wonderful short story into a serial. It's perfect as it is.
HOT! VERY Hot!! The perfect blend of BDSM for me. Loved the present tense (Pov). Short and completely satisfying. Contest winner. Definitely a 10 on a scale of 1 to 5. And now one of my favs.
Thank You!
Such a delightful BDSM tale! Please, please, PLEASE come back to Kori and James! I so want to see how their relationship takes flight. Perhaps she comes home to home to him after a hard day in the courtroom, having to be dominant and in charge, and Daddy makes everything better. Or she snaps at him and he punishes her. Please don't shelve these characters forever
Per my Daddy I was to find a story that made me ache, and this one was it. I very much enjoyed the part where every one of her holes were filled and she was becoming physically overwhelmed then began experiencing the veins on his cock, and tasting his pre cum. I also appreciated that there was a softness to him and he wasn’t in it for just a couple fucks; there’s a future between the two. It was nicely written, and I’d be delighted to have that gentleman as my neighbor. Him and his fat cock.
This story was amazing! I was hooked from the moment she turned the stereo up and brought him to her door and then taunted him, calling him Daddy" and asked what he was going to do about it if she DID sass him again! Perfect! And he had exactly the right combination of discipline and petting. Just Wow!
OK, I'm trying to not drool here. What a story! I'm glad I've read Lit today just for this story. It has made reading a good thing today. I'd love to see a "more" on this one or parts 2-5 or more. We need more background on both people and especially Daddy. We need to see them develop into a full relationship and real strong love.
That was surprisingly steamy, given that the participants aren't actually in a true taboo relationship, yet it feels somehow even more naughty as a result. Great premise, curious to see how it plays out.
A lot of good elements, and a few "non-sequiters"...
Editing and combining some of the elements in Nemarle's story
https://www.literotica.com/s/i-dont-tell-anyone-about-spanking
might make it even better? But good enough as it is, I'm just greedy?
That was fantastic! Loved the combination of rough, strict, and tender. Very hot.
Outstanding! A rare (for this site) plausible story with nice caring BDSM.