All Comments on '"Daddy" Joins The Family Pt. 02'

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DarkEyesYYCDarkEyesYYC9 months agoAuthor

To those of you who enjoyed Part 1, I hope you find this a worthy follow up. As always, happy to hear feedback and to try and incorporate into stories going forward. Sorry for the extreme delay, will try to make next writing start and finish much sooner!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Nice sequel. Keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved it!

Bleep735Bleep7358 months ago

I can’t wait to see where you can take this story. Fantastic!

ToughSailorToughSailor6 months ago

Great. So far so good considering I'm not a fan of the dom/sub plot line. As of yet "Daddy" still hasn't fucked Michelle properly. Come on next chapter . . . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story, bring on pt3…Michelle needs a boyfriend to be trained in discipline so there are spit roasting opportunities for the women

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Long time reader, who decided to give the writing thing a try though it's a bit intimidating with so much talent on this site! Don't hesitate to send feedback. I'd love to know what you think, and I'll do my best to incorporate feedback into future stories.

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