All Comments on 'Daddy Loves Daughter as Wife Ch. 00'

Great story. You write well. Keep writing.

I liked the change of story line. Having the daughter fantasize and masturbate was nice.

By no means was the story too long. Easily could be 2-3 X longer and still been an easy read.

i gave you 5 stars

, i liked it vary much.

I like the story but gave you four stars as the story was short and could have been a page or two longer. All together well written.

So not trying to be a downer, but I truly couldn't get past the first 4 paragraphs. The reason being, your sentences tend to be fragmented. I struggled with reading it because I had to mentally fix the grammatical errors and punctuate the sentences where needed. I'm sure it would be a great story, if I didn't have to keep rereading and fixing the problems. Keep trying, though!!! None of us are close to perfect the first time!!