All Comments on 'Daddy, Please!'

It's always nice to read through an erotica story that's equal parts physical and emotional intimacy. Alvin and his dad were able to successfully ignite their bond that way. The playful language between them suggested an inner child that had longed to be validated but were suppressed before. It's a beautiful and cathartic coming out for the both of them as father and son.

Decent story, but the overuse of alliteration and adjectives made the story a but difficult to really get into.

Decent story, but the overuse of alliteration and adjectives made the read a bit tough to enjoy.