by brokendarkone
As a chubby pink haired bunny myself, I greatly approve and thank you for some new ideas
Very well done. gave you 5 Stars as I will be reading this again at some point. You do have a few type O's that need to be corrected. Or not. Your call. But I definitely will be reading the rest of this series.
Few typos, but other than that, it was a great read. Great story line
Great story! You paint a picture with words in the reader's mind that is clear and realistic. Looking forward to more!