by HJO66
Sorry, what? Is this the end? You did all of that set-up for this? There's no pay-off, either emotional or sexual. Did you maybe accidentally leave in the words "The End"?
"one of the richest people on the planet" it started poorly and just got worse.
Round and round and still not going anywhere.
A bout of wealth-reality is in order.
And, to top it off, the daughter's tiny titles have yet to be seen?
At least you got published.
Too much lead in…the bs about all the wealth…enough already. And a “motel”? Shoot your editor.
What is so erotic about a spoiled brat, even if this brat has nice breasts? How can this Harold be a tough businessman and earn millions of dollars, if he cannot say 'no' to his wife and daughter? Why publish a story that makes me feel sick?
Lmfao the comment section is popping. But in all seriousness this story sucks
Congratulations you surpassed that Indian guy with your story! It's now officially, the worst I've ever read in Literotica.