All Comments on 'Daddy's Droid Ch. 01'

Can't wait for the next chapter!

5* almost dropped it to 4 due to the abruptly severed story line. Left it as 5 assuming there will be a continuation.

I guess it's intended but I would appreciate it if you could mark more clearly when a recording starts and ends. The jumping is kind confusing. No idea if she really gets fucked as a droid or just enjoy a recording.

The story is awesome and I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.

Thanks, KodJak22. I'm glad you enjoyed this. But you're right, it is confusing. The recordings were originally identified using font changes ... I should have done the <<thing>> here. For what it's worth, a revised version of the full story is available for free on Smashwords.com (once you unfilter the feed). Cheers, CS