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ireadliteroticaireadliteroticaover 1 year ago

Damn, real nice story even if this was shorter than the first. But that's fine since this was more of an epilogue

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

That moment when he told Dakota her mother would have been as proud of her as he was, after she asked him if he was proud of her... damn, that was lovely.

As for that ending line, if it were to continue into a part 3, please don't ruin it by adding more people. Perhaps it's best to end it here. I would rather imagine they continued their relationship, remaining faithful to each other, for the rest of their lives. It would only build upon this special, loving bond they've been cultivating all this time. Adding extra people would just ruin that as far as I'm concerned. I'm sure many would agree. It just doesn't suit the story and it would be a shame to tarnish it like that.

Anyway, assuming this is the end, it's a great story of father/daughter love and overcoming a painful loss. 5/5

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