All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Princess Pt. 01'

Dreadful, it just didn't work. Your writing style is so immature.

next chapter soon please. If Aylin hasnt had her prom yet that would be an awesome chapter.

Unrealistic and boilerplate. It's been done thousands of times prior, same story, different date of submission.

Your writing is horrible. You can’t tell who is talking when is run together

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Loved this, and will be waiting for part two!

He needs to breed his daughter. She would look beautiful with a baby bump .

All 4 parts are complete and soon to be published. Thanks for the feedback on my very first writing.

Ignore the people who can’t even be bothered to set up an account. You off to a great start. I for one look forward to your next story

MORE Please

What a hot start!

Exactly... listen to what Whipmaster says, because I've seen this a lot around here: endless "anonymous" criticism of writers. Nobody on here writes perfectly -- not anywhere near to. But we do the best we can.

I can't wait to read more!

Good first story. Comments like "horrible", "dreadful", are not useful and seem like typical internet trolls trying to make a new author feel bad and quit. Story is realistic, incest is taboo because the desire is common, resistance is high due to the power imbalance and the chance of emotional damage high. And the slightly increased chance of birth defects. Boilerplate? As in everything has been done? That criticism has been around at least since Shakespeare. Probably since the first story told around a campfire in 10,000 BC. As in Father - Daughter incest stories have the same elements? OK - so anonymous ones - do better!

Looking forward to the next few chapters.

5 stars, but I was hoping for a Daddy Daughter fuckfest. Hope he fucks her in her cheerleader outfit. Then on prom night with sexy lingerie under her dress. Sheer bra, satin garterbelt, sheer stockings, frilly ankle sox and heels that she keeps on while fucking Daddy. Hoping for a cum drinking facial.

I really enjoyed this, and am eagerly waiting for the next parts. Thank you for writing and sharing.

As with all good porn, waiting for the cum shot !

Sexy Daddy should have hair for that manly dad chest -- something for her to run her fingers through and to taste wither tongue!

Love how this shows even with a overwhelming need, the step to cross into such a relationship is a big one. Well done, love to see how this develops.

this was a really lovely part.1! i love daddy/daughter taboo so naturally i’m excited for part.2 and (hopefully) the many more amazing stories to come <3

Lots to unpack here. Pros: hot, good detail and honest realistic characters. Con: not a big fan of Jason screwing his wife when she is or is pretending to sleep. To me, it makes Jason seem like a self centered person. The story is a little tired. That having been said, I will be reading the rest soon.