All Comments on 'Daddy's Pretty Girl'

I call that Screaming Creaming hot pumping SEX.

more please and thank you. my mouth is watering over here.

Made me cum

this was a very hot story. i found the descriptions really great. been waiting for more for a while now...

Well written but why jump in so fast? There has to be a slow build up to the first "touch" along with a little resistance and guilt coupled with reasoning and determination to fulfil one's insestious desire. I think if you slow it down a bit you'd be more enjoyable to read.

There was one thing that I could have done without and that's the way she enjoyed being ravished and roughly fucked by her daddy's thick cock all while being a teenaged virgin.... That's just not realistic.

loved it

That was a hot and sexy to read for real virgins.

Thank you so much, guys! This is my first attempt so I really appreciate the feedback. I'll do my best to add a new chapter soon, and to keep your thoughts and ideas in mind.

great! love how you took some time establishing, but not too much. more please, and longer if you could :)

From the female/daughter perception. Entertaining, continual pace and well written. I will admit I could not associate that well from the female perspective; but, that in no way lessened the quality of the story/writing. Thank you.

great story. well written. hot!