by Rheyn
Story going great this drama not really needed, hopefully stays on track and no pregnancy. Been there done that.
zero reason to have the mom be a cheater and him finding out that way..does not add to the story, ruined it for me
I apologize for the long delay in my stories. I am working more on daddies punishment don't worry! I still have at the very least 2 long chapters planned for this series. But I am also working on another story that I am writing. I posted a short story
chapter to keep my readers occupied for the time being.
If you wish to see progress on current stories, check out my profile. I try to update it when I can. Just been dealing with real life issues. Thanks to everyone!
This is truly one of the best stories I've ever read. Daddy is just amazing and has an incredible sense of humor, I LOVE him. Too bad he got his heart broken, but I kind of anticipated it, I thought it's either going to be a kind of will for him to take a special care of their daughter to alleviate their sense of guilt, or a shocking betrayal. I just hope he wouldn't take it out on his baby girl. I'd hate to see him go bad and violent. It would be a shame if their relationship ruined because of that bitch. I can't wait for what happens next. I can't help but think what would happen if that brother of his turned out to be the one his wife was cheating with.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing such a beautiful, lighthearted and touching story. You're a great writer. PLEASE try to finish the next chapter soon.
I've been having problems getting this page to load. Finally did and now it won't let me rate it. When I try to go to your submissions page I get nothing but a blank screen. I've rebooted my laptop and still can't get there. What is going on?? And where is part 6? Getting really feckin' frustrated with Literotica lately!! Anyone else having issues or is it just me? Please get the next chapters on here!! No wonder so many writers/creators are ditching Lit and going elsewhere!!
I loved this whole series so much! I got horny from most of it. But now I need a part 6!!!! Gotta know what happens to this unknown person!!
That was the literal worst cliffhanger you could’ve left! We need more!!
Is that it??? That’s just not right to leave the story like that!!!
Great story but we really need a update. PLEASE, if you're out there, give us the next chapter!!!!
PLEASE post a sequel letting us know:
- what you and Tyler discovered;
- another rendezvous with Alexis;
- you and your daughter's relationship . . .
It's been 7 years that you have left us hanging . . .
A great plotline, just a pity that your grammar and spelling have let you down throughout this series, making it all difficult to read.
Please consider updating this plotline as you have left more avenues open than you have closed.
While I like the daddy punishment stories, this one was another of those where the father is a selfish lover. Can't call him a dominant because even dominates give their sex slaves pleasure. Sure she got pleasure from him pounding her but where was the reciprocation of oral...ijs like tge story hope there's a chapter 6 soon