All Comments on 'Dads and Sons'

Disjointed, but good none the less

This is so twisted and Hot at the same time. The pairings, threesomes and foursome were hot enough. Now you're going add another father/son, that'll probably make my head explode. Or both of my heads. I loved this story and can't wait for chapter #2. MLF

Great storyline. It was a bit hard to follow, going back and forth from one character to another. Maybe a different font would have helped. I was however very intrigued and ROCK hard through most of it. Hope there is another chapter.

Hot story but the character switch needs a row of ******* or something to separate one character from the next as they tell their story.

Update with markers/notes when the POV changes, and this would be gold

Nasty and hot!

SO fucking hot and erotic. One of the best orgasms Ive had in years, exploded during the first brilliant fucking scene at the cabin. Brilliant erotic writing. More, please. Yure a fabulous writer.

That is soooooo fucking hot ! Part 3 hopefully ???

Chapter 2 ...please excuse my dumb thumb !

Unbelievably hot story. Always fantasized about my father from the first time I seen him naked. Even better bringing in best friend and his dad. That would be the perfect weekend.

bob716567@gmail.com, if you would like to chat about about like fantasies.

Great story but would be better if you noted who was talking/thinking. All of the POV changes got confusing.

Awesome story something I wish to explore for real !!!!

fuck my pussy is so wet reading this

Now that was so hot, from the first words to the very end Hot, hot, hot!

Was great

Anyone in Washington state near Olympia

Holler at me

Two four oh

Five oh nyne three

Very hot. Send our “boys” on a gay cruise ship vacation.

Nothing like good clean family fun! Great story.