All Comments on 'Dad's The Man Ch. 12'

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elspethsheynaelspethsheynaalmost 13 years ago
Another Great Chapter

Not much to say other than that I loved it. I love your characters and how you've portrayed them. Still can't wait for more, but i'll be looking for 13 tomorrow. Thank you for another GREAT chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Been There.

I haven't commented on any of the previous chapters and have read them all. I even went down to the Jaybird club and helped Kat kick the shit out of the two other strippers.I haven't been this involved in a Lit. story for a very long time. Please keep up the great writing and if I had to pay to read this story I definitely would. Good luck and ciao.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
what....

What can I say but another "5" all the way and it just keeps getting better.! Things like this is what bothers me about this site.* Because as soon as this story ends we all have to go a looking for another good story and they are few and far between.!! To bad there is not a good story that never ends -- has to be as good as this one though.*^)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love your work!

Great writer, lots of talent. I care about your characters and hurt when they do. Awesome job of making these people real. 5 stars on everyone.

pusylvr69pusylvr69about 12 years ago
HOT AGAIN!!!

I have to agree with everyone that has commented on this story 100% and add my two cents in...amazing read. I have found myself so involved with these characters and the emotion throughout the story, that I found myself disagreeing out loud with Gina and forgiving of Peg. Please keep up the good work! You are an amazing writer!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow!

This is one of the most beautifully written series that I have yet to read on Literotica yet, so erotic yet so very loving and tender in the next breath.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Excellent story. So well written.

Verrrry sexy. There is so much to this series; so much going on and so many changes. The characters are maturing and getting closer physically and emotionally. I will likely have to read it again in its entirety. 5* -d.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a8 months ago

This writer knows how to use the English language. He/she has kept gutter slang to a miminum. Sex occurs only as expected. For me, mutually consensual incest stories is about the emotionaland psychological changes/growth the characters go through. Sex is simply icing on the cake. 5 stars.

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