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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Needs work

What the hell happened? He's on a date with a hottie and her sister, and suddenly he's in the back room doing the waitresses? Huh?

Need a lot of editing, "defiantly" instead of "definitely" is one example but there's multiple others.

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