by Mason_Hawk
Very intriguing and exciting, I look forward to the second part with tepidation
Mooooo I loved the story and while reading I pumped my udders and dreamed of being bred. Please write another story
Very well done. One of the best Hucow stories on Lit, I think. A continuation would be appreciated. Sensitive character development for everyone in the story is certainly a plus. Carry on!
Well Done and outstanding. The need for more chapters is a must. Great storytelling and great character development. This a five star chapter that must be followed by more. A prefect Hucow adventure. Cheers
I love it! The character development is awesome and engaging and the build up is the same! I think I personally would enjoy longer passages and more elaboration in the explicit sections. Some more details and maybe some well-placed dirty talk would take this from a 10/10 to an 11! Love it, definitely write more :)
Please write part 2. It's so good, I've re-read it a few times and I'm always happy with the read. š
OMG how fantastic the story was to read. Read it many time as I pumped my udders. Please write more.
Hope part two posted soon. I have read the story over and over and dreamed it was me.