All Comments on 'Dakota's Surprise Pt. 04'

by mfan2112

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Need more

Awesome story. Need more of it. Keep it cumming!!

Billbob47Billbob47over 3 years ago
Beautiful story

I get all wrapoed up in dakotas story. It isnt often that a writer has me crying when i read their work. You did it. These are wonderfull

curricdcurricdover 3 years ago
Keep up the good work!

I am enjoying the story very much. I like the twists and turns of the story. It is respectful and realistic in the developing situations and relationships. I look forward to the next chapters.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 3 years ago
Sign me up for your fan club

Just so fascinating and hot. You also have a nasty (nasty good) knack for cliffhangers keeping me at the edge waiting for the next chapter while I'm still wet.

xoxo,

Di

mfan2112mfan2112over 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for the kind comments. They mean a lot to me as an author new to this craft. They keep me motivated to write more. The final two parts of Dakota are in the works and will be coming soon.

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