All Comments on 'Damaged Ch. 08'

This was definitely different but in a good way. Certainly not what I'm used to considering all your other submissions, however I can appreciate it! It had s certain depth and elusiveness to it that confused and captivated all at the same time. Bravo!

Holy crapola!! I really didn't see that coming. I know Alan would hurt Sophia if she tried to harm Teri but I didn't expect him to kill her and himself. Great story but sad ending. To bad Teri couldn't have raised Dean with his new sibling.

This was truly an incredible story. I'm still crying. Alan was so dark and yet I couldn't stop caring for him. I was hoping Alan would snap out of it and end up with Teri. I do feel better knowing Dean likes his aunt and she seems to care for him as well. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

Amazingly well written.

why couldn't he live??? Sophia got what she deserved...but why Alan? although i am glad teri is pregnant, thats more settling.

This was a beautiful story!

Well done