by TrueNorth1969
why couldn't he live??? Sophia got what she deserved...but why Alan? although i am glad teri is pregnant, thats more settling.
This was truly an incredible story. I'm still crying. Alan was so dark and yet I couldn't stop caring for him. I was hoping Alan would snap out of it and end up with Teri. I do feel better knowing Dean likes his aunt and she seems to care for him as well. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
Holy crapola!! I really didn't see that coming. I know Alan would hurt Sophia if she tried to harm Teri but I didn't expect him to kill her and himself. Great story but sad ending. To bad Teri couldn't have raised Dean with his new sibling.
This was definitely different but in a good way. Certainly not what I'm used to considering all your other submissions, however I can appreciate it! It had s certain depth and elusiveness to it that confused and captivated all at the same time. Bravo!