All Comments on 'Damaged Goods Pt. 01'

‘ Therefore I'm wishing you a happy whatever doesn't offend you day.’

It’s more a matter of no day is good if people can’t find something offensive to go off on;-)

good beginning

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Liked the premise of the story - something different. Thanks and I look forward to the next chapter.

Very different than your usual style. Really enjoyed it so far. Thank you.

Thanks for the great story and looking forward to Chapter 2! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Great start, I wonder what you have in store for this young lad! Looking forward to the next installment.

Cheers

SAGE

As a fan who places your new issuances above others, I can say that you turned your normal writing upside down with this one. It has the good old R401a vibes but in a new package. Keep writing and know that for every one of the negative Nellies out there, there are 10 more of us who hit a 4 or 5 and don't say a word.

I like your stories - you tell them well and with correct grammar & spelling.

[ I know I'm a nerd, but those things are important to me. :) ]

Don't know why anyone would complain about your writing, this was as always exceptional.

A different story line than usual. Interest duly piqued

Well thought up, good tale, looking forward to part 2