All Comments on 'Damian Ch. 01: DESPERATE MEASURES'

Nice work on expanding (your version) of the universe! Looking forward to where you take Damian and Cassie.... Also, I hope that Lily doesn't give you too much trouble - watch out, she's wily!

Thanks again, oneagainst, for the characters and the support for this alternate universe...

Oh I love this. I can't wait to see how Lilly is punished and how Cassie morphs into whatever

I don't know what drugs you're on, but I suggest you seek help.

Intriguing start, but where's the rest of it?

Way over my head, like miles over.

Way too convoluted.

lol thanks everyone for commenting and giving it a chance. I promise, it will get more interesting (and less convoluted) as the story progresses. Unfortunately, I submitted three chapters and only one made it (I was late on the submission).

Darn backstory/character development!

I get this is an AU, but it's hard to separate that he and Lily, in the original, were talking about what Cassie was doing to try to keep Damian. Since this picks up after the end of What We Say in the Dark, it implies those conversations still happened, making Damian less innocent than he makes himself out to be. Not to mention his unwanted groping of Jen in Monogamist. Having him acknowledge these things might make him more sympathetic to readers of the OG.