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All Comments on 'Damian Ch. 08: WHAT'S HAPPENING?'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Love the mood. The way it and is so evocative and real. I can feel what Damien feels.

But why is he giving Cassie the light of day? She deserves so much worse.

flynn99flynn998 months agoAuthor

Hey, all -- author here.

Just want to make sure you know that chapters 9 and 10 (the conclusion) will publish on Oct 20 '23 to coincide with a story challenge event. I hope you've enjoyed this arc so far... Thanks for your patience.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

So real! I could feel what they're feeling. These aren't one-dimensional characters but read like real people.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I love the nod to Kushiel. I agree with the previous comments that the mood in this one is intense.

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Old enough to know better, but I don't. First story arc complete -- Damian's Tale, 10 chapters. I have a couple more series on the way. Thanks for your support!