All Comments on 'Damian'

Nice first effort. A coupe suggestions:

1) A (detailed, you can never have enough detail when writing smut), description of Mrs.

2) More detail when describing action, slowing it down is ok.

Thanks, looking forward to next part!

Great first effort. Five stars.

great start, eager to read more :)

carrie

Lovely beginning and storyline. 💋

Veronica

A lovely little story! Femdom and Feminisation are always enjoyable to read about, and this was very well-written, especially before the first sex scene, almost like an older novel! A minor complaint is that

a more detailed physical description of Mrs M. would be preferrable, such a thing might seem purple in "serious" literature but it nice to have in erotica

SO WONDERFULLY EXCITING AND WISHING TO BE PART OF IT DOING ALL THE SAME,,,

LOVED IT!!!

LOVED IT!!!

Loved the concept. A caring kinky older woman with some humiliation and SPH. I look forward to more.

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