by pengoddess
HOT HOT HOT. Even better than the first one. This is so sweet. Great writing and steamy sex scenes. Keep this series going... PLEASE? Ok, now I need a cold shower.
- Dawn
GREAT,im always into ir fun cant wait 2 see what u have planned next.
This story is hot. I want to be Fay. Mmmm, good. I can't wait for the next one! Hurry. =)
The second chapter was so goooood. All I could do was imagine myself as being Fay. Please keep writing more
I loved this story...Fay is sooo lucky. i wanted to be her on that picnic table sooo bad...
Damn I'm jealous, that is my biggest fantasy to have a hot black cop fuck me over and over..I told my hot black boyfriend about it, maybe someday he will fullfill that fantasy.Keep writing I really loved your stories.
You should finish the story. She should become pregnant with his child - More than once!