All Comments on 'Damn Ch. 04'

almost a year and an update. congrats!!! please finish this story. :) i am glad your back. :)

I'm loving the different layers of intrigue you're weaving amongst the sexual tension and attractions. Cudos for the balance you are managing to maintain between story line and character development. There are not 2D people here!

Can't wait for your next update.

Dam!! dam, dam.

How did dylan and Alec ended up with mothers like theirs?

I think that Kayla and Becca have the same Richard in common.

Please update soon

really entertaining story. I CANT WAIT FOR RICHARD TO GO DOWN. . . THE BASTARD. just check grammar and punctuation more closely. keep up the good work.

Getting to the Heart of everything Dylan,Alec,Kayla & Becca. Now we need to know more of their Familys and the Downfall of Richard.

poor little rich brats. I notice they haven't turned down the money though.

All I want to know if there is more or is it going to end with me hanging from a tree?

Steve

Please.

please you are probably busy but please don't leave u hanging!!!...please finish it!!..pretty please!!

please finish! i want alec and kayla to really get it on

*sitting like a puppy waiting for next chapter.....please...please?

Please finish it Im excited to find out what happens

It's been my experience that when the last posting is 6months or more that the writters life has taken over and there is no longer time to finish. But, if you read these comments please, please finish. The story line is all wonderful, I can't wait to find out how everyone will finish the story.

i have been witing for the rest of this story for the longest.....please finish

I'm so upset I can't believe you didn't do the next chapter next I'm crying over here- have some sympathy please!!

Hey this is getting good where the next chapter

With this series please update it soon?

I like this story please let me when you post the next chapter.

Please continue, I need it.

Please continue the story I would love to find out what happens next.

PLZ NEED MORE NOW!!!!

I always manage to find a 'damn' good story, and when I think I'll just be able to read chapter after chapter, BAM! Story isn't finished. Why start if you can't finish. I can understand like a few months, maybe a year at the absolute most, but 3-4 years? What's going on?? Fantastic story, terrible cliffhanger.

...how you draw me in.

I would caution one thing, though--it is kind of uncanny how you've drawn Dylan's mother and Alec's mother as such mirror images, as well as who must be Richard to be dating Alec's Becca and him having dated Kayla. Some would say that's too "convenient," although I don't get the Janet/Richard angle--which is unique. How to remedy that is past moot now, not that it takes away from the story to me.

Love how detailed this is, which you master in description. You draw me in, although it appears there's no more chapters forthcoming. 5, although I hope you'll return sometime and write more--as I've really enjoyed these--and want to see Alec and Kayla advance on the romance.

Even with the small grammatical errors, I really like how this story is unfolding. I understand life happens and it takes time for a story/idea to develop, this is worth waiting for. It's not all about the sex....maybe the build up to it and beyond that. The back stories were much appreciated. Is Richard another common denominator between Kayla and Becca and possibly even Janet (Rick is short for Richard)? This may be too coincidental about Richard and how they are meeting up.

Another good story put on hold!! I hope all is well... please consider finishing this fic.

Oh cmon not another one bites the dust…again