by soular
God forbid that something happen to Brandon; all I know is that she better not end up with that sorry Chris - how dare he discuss Sienna's pregnancy is such an open forum?! What an idiotic jerk!!!
Chris needed more than a slap, how does he screw lives over and get to go back home?? All for BT punching his face... Feel so bad BT, got all teary during the last scene
Both Brandon and Sienna are fucked up. With Brandon's temper and lack of controlling it, it is only a matter of time that he is either in prison or dead. sienna is the cause of all her own problems and we're supposed to feel for her.
oh lord im so torn, its her body but hes so right ooomgggg i love it i feel like crying for both of them >.<
I don't like the fact that you made Sienna look like this low self esteem girl standing there and taking Brandon's abuse. At least you could of had her yell, scream our curse him out at some point.
You have written this story line beautifully... Is this even a word lol ... I can relate to both parties feeling .. And the female main character isn't being lame she is very pregnant and is in a very vulnerable position .. I'm so loving this
Thank you so much for sharing
This chapter never fails to get me riled up! As much as I dislike BTs comments, Sienna had it coming! Hell they're both wrong. Smdh.
I would have cussed his ass out but then again i wouldn't give that satisfactory of that so. I would went back to his packed my shit and went back to my dads house. No delays no hesitations.
I understand why he is angry, but he is being a fűcking asshole. I know she should have told him, but hell if i was in her situation i too would think twice before i told him about it. And with her dad and everything and at 18. Yet he is being an ass about it , hell she doesn't deserve this.
Ohhhhhhhh hell nawww. That bitch in the bar had no right to sneer and look down on Sienna. If I were Sienna I would cuss that bitch out so hard and beat her ratchet ass!!"
If commander Jackson is 50 then he was 32 and sienna's mother was 20 when sienna was born. That means the age difference between Jackson and Dara is a lot more than that between Brandon and Sienna. So Jackson fretting over the age difference does not make any sense. Just a thought......
Soular, you are such a brilliant writer! You have a true gift of the pen, lady. Your characters come alive, and I can vividly imagine the scenes, emotions and situations you create for them...for us. I LOVE reading your work. Certainly, you are the BEST author on this forum. Thank you so much!
Brandon is a loose cannon, and would be a disaster as a husband and father. Sienna should get fixed, go get her education and leave this hot head before he kills somebody, maybe even her!
Lol, when Brandon asked her why she didn't tell him I would've been like "I was planning a party or something to let you know that I was pregnant" ;D lol probably would've worked