All Comments on 'Dangerous Games Ch. 01'

Erotic perfection.

Intensely erotic and suspenseful; storyline has potential. Glimpse into two MCs; like the femme fatale you are creating. Looking forward to more. xxxxx

Thanks for your comments and please keep ‘em coming. Ch2 will be up soonish, I hope you’ll like it. xxx

Nope not for me, she’s far too calculating. What an utter psychotic bitch. A full on bunny boiler. The first part of the story was erotic, the second half was really ugly, I couldn’t even read it all the way through, just skipped to the end. This should be in Non Consent/ Reluctance, he is very definitely Reluctant.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

This is so, so good. Excellent writing.

Amazing and so, so sexy! Cannot wait for Chapter 3!

I love this story, both chapters. I need chapter 3!