All Comments on 'Dani - A Love Story'

Loved this story, no domination or such. just a sweet story of boy and gurl falling in love.

would like to read another chapter this is a good story

I am a deeply romantic Gurl at heart. I envy Dani very much. Beautiful story.

Xxxx

Penelope

Hope you'll tell your friends. I'll admit it, I've got an ego. I'd like to get this one kicked into the "HOT" category and Hall of Fame. I hadn't planned another chapter, but promise to think about it. I do have another "first time" themed story coming soon.

Terrific story. Really gets into the heart and head of the guy. You keep writing, I'll keep reading Loved it. Great work.......

An intelligent, moving and uncliched story. Oh but for more of those around here...

Such lucky people !

...that's as rare as hens teeth, let alone well written, concise in its storyline, builds an interesting and compelling pair of lovers. Good read, and you'll make it to hot... best of luck on the hall of fame though. 5 *... Will be watching for more from you. Cheers! --- Josie

A touching, lovely story.

Nice, 5*... Will there be any more to this tale? I hope so

I'm a sucker for a long, slow romantic story, and you have hit the bull's eye with this one. It is all the better as the pov we usually get is that of the TS rather than the straight partner, as here. Much better than the usual physical act leading the romance! I look forward to your next story.

And very romantic. Though I have to admit, everytime I read Bowser, my thoughts flashed back to Sha Na Na. LOL

such a wonderful love story made me cry tears of joy and turned me on as well

awesome .. looking for next episode

but I gave up at the end of page 2, because there was no sense of actual romance!

I love, love , loved this!!

But a wonderfully epic story none the less!

Lovely story, absolutely worth it.