by Rabbitman55
By the time the trip ends sara should be a wife rather than a daughter. They should start a family together
please continue give more part. Keep the emotion,love between Daniel and Sara..your writing is outstanding .. Very few writers show this passion emotion in a relationship.. have become a fan of your writing.. i think i cant explain my feeling coz every explanations will come short before your talent..plzzzzzzz writeeeeee the next chapterrrr as quick as possible... 😍😍😍
Thank you for your very high praise. You should get a username account, it feels weird to refer to you as "anonymous"! I am working on Part 7, but for some reason, the server erased over 4000 words from it, which means I have to put in hours just to rewrite what was already written! It's going to take an extra day at least to fix it, so please be patient. It's good to know one has such admiring fans! I have more chapters planned, at least to the point where Sara leaves for college.
I love this story. Please don't let her get pregnant... at least not by her father. I'd much prefer them to engage in a hedonistic relationship. Leave the babies to be made by non-father daughter sex.
Thanks for your efforts.
Rabbitman has a knack for developing characters that the reader truly likes and then letting reader and writer frolic in the joy. This is another example of that talent.
I love it.
THANKS