All Comments on 'Daniel and Sara Pt. 11'

This story is going nowhere. It's only repeating itself over and over again.

Just enough sex and love. I wish I could write like that, but being an engineer I am luck to be able to spell my own name.

I can't wait for Part 12 of the Daniel and Sara story. The plot line has been interesting, the dialogue entertaining, the characters believable and likeable, and each sex scene was both fresh and erotic. The writing feels effortless as the story has unfolded fluidly. I do wish the author would take time to review the proper use of apostrophes, particularly in contractions, personal pronouns, and with singular and plural nouns. But I have to admit that those occasional errors did not keep me from thoroughly enjoying this well-written series. Thanks, Rabbitman55, you are a 5-star author consistently.

Thanks for your great review. Sorry about the apostrophies; I was a history major a long time ago and haven't done a lot a writing since then until now, when I found all this time on my hands. I'll try to pay more attention to the rules of grammar! Glad you're enjoying the story!

It was great having 'The Three Amigos' back together. This was a good chapter; onto the next.

That was an exciting adventure when they came across the orgy.

I like the the sniffing of panties from your previous chapters. Please continue that.

You have to love Rabbitman's sense of humor as he nonchalantly starts this chapter with a brief rundown of the last few activities. It is hilarious.

The rest of the story continues the love affair of his characters. Or should I say my love affair with his characters. I'm having a great time reading this.

THANKS

tedious

This story really needs a tag saying it's a cuckold story

This story really needs a tag saying it's a cuckold story