All Comments on 'Daniel and Sara Pt. 12'

What an amazing love story. Heart warming and wrenching at the same time. While I understand you said this was the planned ending point for this tale, I beg you to keep going. I see so many possibilities for how this story could continue. I personally would love to see Lena come to work in NY meeting up with our 3 paramours and the 4 coming together. The girls Sara and Steph could "marry" and Lena and Daniel could "marry" and all 4 live laugh and love together. Daniel could father some offspring for the group and the girls could say their's was a sperm donor and Lena's was his. I could even see Julia (Steph's mom) getting involved, after her divorce from Paul. I don't think she would be a permanent partner in the group, but I think theirs enough love that they could help her grieve and recover and get to a place where she can find the love she deserves. It would also help the 4 keep their true relationship together a secret if they had someone to confide in and "cover" for them if needed. I truly loved this tale and will be reading more of your work. Thank you. Fuzzy_Kbear

Wow thank you for the rave review. I did say I saw this going to 12 chapters, but obviously, this has more to go. I like some of your ideas, and I was thinking on much the same lines, but with some differences. Thanks again! Working on part 13 now.

The girls need to go off their birth control....

When will he knock her up?

I agree with everything that has been said before. So much more to enjoy with this "extended family". You must keep going for as long as the ideas keep on coming. This is not only about sex but also love and relationships, more power to you.

The history professor could be a hottie with a body and a thing for Daniel. I have enjoyed your story please keep it going as the evolution of the girls has been amazing.

Good story!

At this point in their young personal lives, no one involved needs to get PREGNANT.

Not if Dan really loves them and cares about their lives.