All Comments on 'Daniel Ch. 01'

Thanks so much April601. I really appreciate it. I'll definitely give your stuff a read.

If there's going to be a Chapter 2, get a prooofreader or something. I let it go when he was "peddling" (selling) the bike. Then, around the lotion application, 100 small sentences. Stop that now!!!

Thank you for the story, I really enjoyed it. Sexy plot, likeable characters, great set-ups! Lucky Daniel! Well written too, very evocative. Appreciate you taking the time. 5 stars from me!

Great story. Loved the action, set up and story. Was fun to see Nicole seduce him and flip the roles as well, and getting the group in was sexy as hell. Just a really hot story. Would love to see her play pimp to him to both her friends and strange women, and see him get sensually used in different role play scenarios and settings. Would be amazing to see her act out her own fantasies by hiring him out. Thanks!

One of the better reads for me in a long time. Can't wait for more. Bravo!

Not the traditional CFNM story, but good