All Comments on 'Danielle and David Ch. 04'

I have to admit I was hoping for a little more movement. I'm not talking about the length of time between posts, but I meant the story building. I do like this story but the two few chapters really feel the same to me. I can't say that it was bad because it wasn't, It was a good post. I just wish there was a little more development. I will continue to wait and read

Looking forward to them recognizing one another through voice recognition or something.

What the hell is wrong with Danielle? Here she is accusing David of two-timeing her when she don't have the facts to back up the claim. All the while she is knowingly leading Peter on when she don't love him. Don't drag the plot on too long with them.

I want to hate Peter but I can't. lol He seems to be good to Dani. I was hoping you would show that Peter had some flaws then I could dislike him. Can't wait to see the interaction betweeen David and Dani.

Is it only me or does anyone else think Spike and Peter are the same guy?

Update fast please. I want to know how the meeting would play out. Will dani choose David or Peter/Spike. Hurry! 😄

i hope she chooses Daniel, if not, she is just 'settling' for Peter, bc she knows she doesn't love him. Besides Peter was just too dirty on how he moved in on her and he seems to be bordering on obsessive. If Peter really does love her and she chooses Daniel, he should want whatever makes her happy.

I hope like the dickens you don't keep us waiting too long for the rest of the story....I need to know what's going to happen next. ASAP...LOL

Please do not allow the 'haters' stop you from completing this wonderful story. I for one would like to read more. Keep up the good work

Hi all, Just wanted to let you know that the next chapter will be the final chapter and all questions will be answered. Right now I am writing 4 ebooks to be released on Amazon after March 27th. Then I will complete the final chapter to this story. There will be lots of movement and a few unexpected twist. Thanks for your comments, and especially for reading my work. I appreciate your time and do listen to you.

I think you will do well on Amazon.com. I self published an eBook on there, it's kind of easy and nice to know you have a skill you enjoy that can generate a profit. But don't quit Literitica either. I like to try out my new material here like most aurhors. Keep up the good stories.

Why do authors on this site never finish stories before moving onto other stories or publishing on Amazon or other ebook site. This is very discouraging to the readers of your stories. It is so sad to start to read something become enthralled with the characters only to be left wanting.

Wtf, really omg I gripped my bed frame your trying to kill me aren't u?

PLEEEEEAS WRITE MORE!!!! (Great job so far...)

Next chapter please!!! I need to see how they react when they realize who each other is.

nonsense .......mitchew